Great story line, the only thing that I could recommend is, slow down when you're writing & make sure to proofread- I was rushing to get ready for work in the a.m. last week & noticed several mistakes in 1 of my last publishings just after I released it- then had to go back & efit afterwards🤦🏽♀️🤦🏽♀️ we all do it, & your brain runs way faster than your hands so it's very common to miss a letter or inadvertently switch word placements when you're in a hurry. I did enjoy it enough that I will definitely go back for pt 1 & wait for the next episode. Thank U for sharing, I enjoyed it🥰🥰💜💜☯️☯️🧿🧿
I think my reason for steaming through the story at full speed is that I know people don’t have the time/read plenty of other Stacks. So im like right let’s get to the end quickly so people get to the end 😂😂
Lmao, I get it but have more faith in your works- if its interesting enough to keep someone who's extremely busy & has ADHD🙋🏽♀️🙋🏽♀️ engaged then u have a good thing going- don't worry about the clock- people make time for what they deem important (regardless of the why)🥰🥰💜💜☯️☯️🧿🧿
Hey cool! I probably need to learn more about Warhammer 40K before I have too much to say, but I admire you foraying into writing! Keep it up!
Thank you very much. It’s why I’ve included so many pictures because a picture does paint a thousand words.
I am not familiar with the Warhammer 40,000 universe, but I enjoyed your story. It has a nice rhythm ;-)
Thank you very much for reading.
I liked it. Reminded me that I had written one super short W40K story, about a guardsman named Crux.
Great story line, the only thing that I could recommend is, slow down when you're writing & make sure to proofread- I was rushing to get ready for work in the a.m. last week & noticed several mistakes in 1 of my last publishings just after I released it- then had to go back & efit afterwards🤦🏽♀️🤦🏽♀️ we all do it, & your brain runs way faster than your hands so it's very common to miss a letter or inadvertently switch word placements when you're in a hurry. I did enjoy it enough that I will definitely go back for pt 1 & wait for the next episode. Thank U for sharing, I enjoyed it🥰🥰💜💜☯️☯️🧿🧿
Thank you for reading.
I think my reason for steaming through the story at full speed is that I know people don’t have the time/read plenty of other Stacks. So im like right let’s get to the end quickly so people get to the end 😂😂
Lmao, I get it but have more faith in your works- if its interesting enough to keep someone who's extremely busy & has ADHD🙋🏽♀️🙋🏽♀️ engaged then u have a good thing going- don't worry about the clock- people make time for what they deem important (regardless of the why)🥰🥰💜💜☯️☯️🧿🧿